Blue Fairy

I really like this i think you should definitely continue it. I can tell it is going to be good. Watch out for your grammer though :D good luck with ...

Thanks Nate, I wondered what was going on :D

I had a flower fairy then that cute white cat with a frog hat disguise for quite a long time and now this one

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Whoah this is really good. I definitely don't mean what happened but the way you laid it out and told everything perfectly. I'm sorry about your dad. :( Does your ...

(Rose) Rose stared down at her stained berry hands and laughed. She stood up from her place on the ground and looked around. Everyone was busy talking or sleeping. Rose ...

(Hannah and Ivy) Ivy scowled at Hannah and the boy, Charlie. Jax tapped Ivy's hand. Ivy turned round quickly. He was offering her a piece of his cheesecake. Ivy shook ...

I'll crit anyway: All of a sudden, the door is flung open, and a girl with shoulder length, red hair peered in, "Have either of you seen a cat, on ...

shouldn't it still be in fan fic anyway?

hahaha I'd sooo read a book about a unicorn called Mr Pepper face! I think i've had a caramel slice but i'm not sure. I wish i could go to ...

Some of the rhythm was a bit off in some places but other then that the poem is ok. :)

Indigo is a really nice colour :D those three colours look really pretty together. :) ~Blue Fairy

Hi welcome to YWS!! I think good should always win but it's nice to have evil to complicate things :D good luck your writing bye ~Blue Fairy

Hi Rukie I love Wales :D Happy (late) birthday! I hope you like YWS. see you around ~Blue Fairy

I can't see you work. Try posting it again :)